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Re: Post your pic on thread 2
Arieda - picture three you have such a pretty smile Jack - sweet tie, I agree with Arieda I like your shmexy smile more...hehheh. Here some more pictures... my crazy ...
May 25, 2005 -
Re: Hey Baby -- crappy title maybe you guys can help me with it
Inspired by Jack's (Firestarter) song Blue Lights. I'm not much of a song/lyrics writer, but I thought I'd try it out for size. This is the first set of lyrics ...
May 24, 2005 -
Re: Post your pic on thread 2
Gibralter with an ape eating peanuts on my shoulder. It was cool, but you can note my unease in the picture That's awesome, a friend of mine got chased through ...
May 23, 2005 -
Re: Daughter of Sion...Chapter Two Up
Chapter Two The long dark hours of waiting set in, Jadyn didn’t want to go out just yet. Scenes haunted her of all the little kids in their costumes mauling ...
May 23, 2005 -
Re: the tears that fall- the perfection of a woman in love
heres my present...I hope it's legible enough. CL
May 22, 2005 -
Re: English class?
English is quite the class for me. When I get my camera back from Kimmie I'll post some of the shenagagins of 6th period AP Lit. CL
May 21, 2005 -
Re: All My Poetry in Motion from 4/12 to 5/20
Poetry in Motion for 4/12 – 5/20 [i] The wishful glimmering ladybug impression: She flies oblivious with no destination Upon a new winter. [ii] Silky darkness heavywithmemories A crescent planetstar
May 20, 2005 -
Re: for lizzy: it's not really goodbye if you don't mean it
one of my best friends is moving to San Francisco on the 10th, this was inspired by what we've shared. ahh the formating again is screwed up. ahh well. enjoy ...
May 20, 2005 -
Re: The Things I See
thought I would help you out with a proper crit. hope its legible enough. CL
May 20, 2005 -
Re: a thank you
I am really impressed by your poetry, and to show my appreciation here's my present, a proper crit. This was the only poem of yours I found I could do ...
May 20, 2005 -
Re: Oscillation
here's my present to you, for sharing such a cool poem. hope its legible enough for you to understand. CL
May 20, 2005 -
Re: Don't Ask Me...
here's my present to you...a proper crit. CL
May 20, 2005 -
Re: fractures
Thought it was time I got around to giving people proper crits...I think I used the poem before you edited it, so sorry if I repeat something that you already ...
May 20, 2005 -
Re: A Moth Fluttered In
hmm...titled maybe something along the lines of unrequited love. I dunno, I'm not the greatest with titles. but I did do a proper crit, I think it was before you ...
May 20, 2005 -
Re: blue girl
since this was such a great read, I thought I owed a proper crit...I hope its not to hard to read.
May 20, 2005
